You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise

Dear
Mrs.
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Patel, I am writing
rgearding
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regarding
the amount of
noise
from the
canteen
which just opened near the
boys
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hostel. The
canteen
is
opened
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until late
night
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at night
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at 1:00 AM.
This
is the reason why there are
lots
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of
noise
till
late
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the late
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night
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of considerable talking and of motorcycles and other vehicles until 2:00 AM.
This
causes me and my neghbour serious issues. We are students so we have very hectic schedule day and when we go to sleep at
night
due to
noise
, we can not sleep very well.
Also
, sometimes I have to do late
night
study either for completing my assignment work or preparing for my exam but due to
this
unavoidable
noise
. I can not concentrate on my study. I would like suggest to college authorities to reduce
canteen
open time to 10:00 PM on weekdays, and leaving as same as now on weekends. I propose that we have to stick the stickers of minimum voice locality in
canteen
. These steps are really helpful to us. Thank you for your attention to
this
important matter. Kind Regards, Utsav Patel
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