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Some people believe that unpaid community activity service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children.) To what extent do you agree or degree?

#people #community #activity #service #part #school #programs #charity #neighborhood #sports #children
Community
 service,
such
 as working for
charity
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a charity
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, improving
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the neighborhood
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neighborhood
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neighborhoods
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,
teaching
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and teaching
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 sports to younger children, among others.,
have
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 always been a great way to teach younger people how important is
the
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society
. In the same way,
consequently
,
this
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essential
esential
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essential
 task is promoted in many developed places,
such
 as
United
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the United
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 States, Japan,
South
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and South
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 Corea, among many others. In the following
text
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 we are going to assess whether making compulsory unpaid
community
 service for high school people is positive or,
otherwise
, negative for
the
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society
.
First
, on the one hand, we should agree with the fact that doing
community
 activities is always positive and
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essential
esential
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essential
 anywhere. It is good because of many reasons, which are so countless that would not fit in
this
 text.
Thus
,
this
 type of work is
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necessary
necesary
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necessary
 for any people's land because it sure helps to create
a
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taking care thought for our own stuff.
On the other hand
, we must realize
about
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the fact that there are not numerous teenagers that enjoy doing obligatory
community
 service.
Therefore
, we can agree that it is better to do it voluntarily (and not compulsorily) because if the work is done through obligation, teenagers will not reach care for
the
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society
, but
hate
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. To conclude, we should agree with the fact that even though the youngers do not wish to
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collaborate
colaborate
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collaborate
, we, as
society
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a society
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, must promote their participation in those types of unpaid
works
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work
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 as long as it is taken as a hobby and not as a compulsory activity. It must be elaborated
through
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in
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 that way because if
this
labor
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 is done compulsorily without giving them explications, the youngers could get angry and hate the system.
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