Many People say that globalization and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. Use specific reason and example to support your answer. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Globalization, as a growing phenomenon is increasingly encroaching upon the whole world and beyond the political borders.
This
event is believed to be an inevitable result of
development
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of multinational companies which do their best to attract
newest
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target populations to sell their products to. There are evidence-based grounds that
this
trend is going to have harmful and
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disastrous
disasterous
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disastrous
effects on the
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environment
evironment
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environment
and accelerate
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climate change. To commence,
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it could be easily realized that people living in different areas of a country including urban and rural areas, all have access to digital gadgets like
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smartphones
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smart phones
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and laptops which are all connected to the international network.
Thus
the products of multinational high-tech companies are available in every single corner of the earth.
Although
no one is held responsible for
this
crucial question, asking what would happen to these devices when they are discarded? Since approximately all of the
electronical
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electronic
devices are mainly made of non-biodegradable materials like plastics, it would take ages
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until
untill
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until
the environment becomes fully cleaned and plastic free.
This
phenomenon will definitely result in habitat loss of many animals and creatures and its tolls will
finally
come back to our lives as
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human beings
humanbeings
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human beings
. As we know a number of genuinely-invented procedures have been invented to recycle disposable materials,
however
using
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these
tese
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these
techniques is expensive and requires a tremendous budget. Due to
this
fact developing countries do not afford that, which will end up in a damaged ecosystem. In my view,
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of gigantic companies who sell products
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all around the world, without considering
further
consequences and the tolls their unrecycled materials might take
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nature is against
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humanity
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values, which will not be solved easily, despite
of
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the newly-
intented
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invented
intended
technologies available in developed countries.
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