Write about the following topic: Some people believe that schools should reward those students who show excellent academic performance while some believe that only the ones who show significant improvement in the grades should be rewarded. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Education
plays a vital role in everybody's life. Some communities believe that rewards
should be done to the offspring, who have excellent performance in their academics
while some other communities argue with this
matter and say that rewards
should be done to the offspring, who have surged in their academics
. In this
essay, I will discuss both scenarios and then
I will give my opinion on this
matter with relevant examples.
On the one side, In every education
sector, Higher authorities will encourage their students
by awarding them based on their academic results. Most students
are utilizing this
opportunity to get free education
. In this
way, talented people in academics
will reach their goals with their results and rewards
. For instance
, In Telangana, some schools are giving free education
to students
who get 10 CGPA in the tenth standard. And another good example is, Students
who secure EAMCET rank within 10000 then
will get a free seat in BTech Universities.
On the other hand
, Students
, who are weak in their academics
should be encouraged to improve their standards by providing some academic rewards
. It is a good way to motivate students
in their academic growth. For instance
, In my college, I received a merit award for my academics
because I improved my percentage from 75% to 85%. And I used this
award money for my hostel payment.
To sum up, In my view, I agree with both statements. Because students
should be encouraged by rewarding them in their academics
because these rewards
give motivation to the students
and help in improving their results.Submitted by madarapulavanya1998 on
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