Many people say that globalization and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. Find the sample answer to this question

Globalization and international

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have an impact throughout the world and

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on the environment. But it is important to comprehend the reasons.

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essay will discuss and provide examples

about

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topic. I would like to start off by saying that some multinational

companies

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are working with a few

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pieces of equipment

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equipment

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equipments

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that

are

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making smoke and contamination

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different cities globally.

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is affecting

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the population’s

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health and along with that bringing certain diseases to

people

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nearby. To eradicate

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issue the government has implanted a lot of regulations so

companies

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will have to follow a protocol to avoid spreading gas or pollution to the near cities and

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around

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reduce

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the exposure to dangerous chemicals to the workers and environment.

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,

companies

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,

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as MultiChoice, McWilliams and Cogroup are realising programs to support

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fact and use their names as

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example

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to the other

companies

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which can boost the possibilities of contamination and damage to the atmosphere. Despite

of

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apply

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assistance,

government

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the government

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needs to continue working to add more multinational

companies

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and work together to improve our environment so

people

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can live without any concern

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apply

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and

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will benefit the health of the population. In conclusion, some multicultural

companies

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are working

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without

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no all the sanitary regulations and

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is causing diseases and possible death of

people

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,

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, elderly

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or some kids, to avoid

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issue government is creating campaigns and strongly supervising them to avoid the grow of

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inconvenience and guarantee a better quality of life.