You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter x describe the problem with the equipment x explain what happened when you phoned the shop x say what you would like the manager to do

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Hello Manager, I regret to write
this
Linking Words
letter to express a concern regarding the purchase of a fridge which I bought from your store on 10th street of New west city.
Firstly
Linking Words
, During the demo, everything looks great, but when I unpack and try to use it at home
then
Linking Words
I was completely terrified and blown away by the huge noise and functioning method.
In addition
Linking Words
, I called your store and none of them answered my calls politely despite the multiple attempts.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, When called the store, I received an unprecedented response from one of the employees,
In addition
Linking Words
, they are not caring about customer service as they just sold products and wash their hands which is not at all acceptable and I did not even think in my dream
this
Linking Words
kind of experience. As you heard, I would like to return
this
Linking Words
product without any
second
Linking Words
thought as
this
Linking Words
not going to help anymore. Having said that, I would really appreciate it if you could provide some training to your employees on how to talk and behave with the customer. I look forward to hearing a response to
this
Linking Words
request. Hope it will come soon. Yours Sincerely, Lakshmi.
Submitted by lakshma999 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: