You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your letter Give details of the purchase Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

to express my dissatisfaction with the service that I received from your online store.

Last

Sunday, I ordered a long-sleeve blue stripe shirt from your online store, and the item code was SLS-1007. After I place the order I got order number R1330, and I paid 2500 rupees for the product including the delivery charges. I received the package yesterday, and the moment I unwrapped the courier, I was shocked to find a casual dress

instead

of a party dress.

Moreover

, the colour and dress material was different. You can imagine how unpleasant it was to receive the wrong delivery of your much-awaited product. I kindly request you to send my original package as soon as possible because I will be having a dinner party on the 25th of July, which means the

week Thursday. I ordered the shirt to wear on

this

occasion. I would appreciate your immediate attention to

this

matter, and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Supun

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173 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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