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Intelligent machines such as robots are widely applied to take the place of human beings. Please discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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The graph illustrates information and data about the number of
membership
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memberships
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 between men and
women
during
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from
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 1980 to 2010. Overall
membership
 between men is more fluctuations
wheras
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whereas
 in
women
 is less various and more stable. The number of
male
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males
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 In 1980 was merely 1000 and followed by two pics it reached
to
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3000(highest peak in
women
) approximately and
then
 in 2000 it underwent
downward
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a downward
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 trend and decreased to almost 2000 and levelled off. The
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men's
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mens
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men's
 figure was more
fluctioted
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fluctuated
 and in 1980 the number of
membership
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members
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 was around 2000 and it rose dramatically to 4000 in 1985 and after a slight
fracture
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 it dwindled abruptly to 1,500 and the in 2005 experienced the biggest surge between all figures in
this
 period and
increast
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increased
increase
shaprply
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sharply
 to 5000
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wichs
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wich
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which
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 is the biggest surge between all category and
then
 it sharply decreased to under 1000 in 2010
wich
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which
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 is the lower rate in
given
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a given
the given
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 period. Overall the graph showed
membership
 between men and
women
are highly fluctuated
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highly fluctuate
have highly fluctuated
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 and both have met
fluctons
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functions
 during 1980 and 2010.
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