It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parent and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

İt is considered by some people that It is important for

children

to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.

Punishment

is necessary to help them learn the

distinction

. I completely agree with the

opinion

. İn my

opinion

,

parents

and

teachers

should execute punishments for their

children

in a detailed way , and

thus

punishments can be provided to

children

for

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learn

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the

distinction

.

Firstly

, a good education is provided in the schools by

teachers

, and

thus

many

parents

wanna send to school their

children

. İn my

opinion

,

the

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good education should be provided in

family

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.

Also

,

good

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education is good

punishment

at

same

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time .

Children

can learn the

distinction

if

parents

or

teacher

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teachers

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will give to

children

a

punishment

properly .

For instance

, a child will

has

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to a bad career in future if

his

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who

make

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a false can be punished badly by his

teachers

or his

parents

.

Secondly

, unfortunately , many

parents

and

teachers

can't execute

punishes

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in an equal way , and

thus

some problems reveal

such

as inequality or

be

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stressed

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among

children

. Many

children

can be rescued from these problems thanks to seminars if governments will set up seminars about the development of

children

for

teachers

and

parents

.

For instance

, a teacher that

give

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a false

punishment

can learn how will give to

children

punishments. To conclude , many

parents

and

teachers

can't execute

punishes

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punishment

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in an equal way , and

thus

many

children

can't learn the

distinction

.

Therefore

much trouble

reveal

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in schools . İn my

opinion

, many

teachers

and

parent

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parents

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can learn to give a

punishment

properly if governments will set up seminars about the development of

children

.