Your company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter - say what you like about the uniform - explain what you don’t you like about the uniform - suggest how the uniform can be improved

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to you to suggest improvements for the new uniform that was recently announced.

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of all, I think that the designers did an overall good job. It looks like the feedback about the previous version was taken into account, and it is good to see that the work on mistakes has been completed.

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, I appreciate that it matches modern safety standards, which is highly important. There is,

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, still some room for improvement. To me and a few other members of our

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yellow buttons and collars look too unprofessional. In my opinion,

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could negatively affect the working atmosphere, as these elements are too eye-catching. I would strongly suggest choosing a neutral colour

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of yellow.

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to that, it would be perfect if the collars were removable,

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way washing will be significantly easier. I hope that my feedback helps and we will have these new uniforms soon available to everyone. Sincerely yours, Dmitry