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Some people think that work is the most important thing in a person's life. Without the success of a career, life becomes meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Having
a
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meaning in
life
 absolutely helps
people
 with
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their
thir
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their
lives
. Some
people
 believe that
this
 meaning comes with
career
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 and success. I, personally, don’t agree with that statement and I’ll explain the reasons below.
First
 of all,
life
 isn’t just about being famous or having lots of money. Some
people
 may, or even be able to enjoy their
lives
 in the absence of cash or fame. Having a healthy and tightly bonded family is sometimes all we needed.
Thus
,
career
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 is absolutely not the only thing that brings meaning to us. That’s the
first
 reason why we can not say that
meaining
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meaning
 in
life
 isn’t dependent on career only.
Secondly
, we cannot say that everyone
have
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 the same advantages to get into a qualified job or sustain it. In many countries, there are
people
 that have to look after their kids or relatives. Since they are not able to reach out to the
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opportunities
oppurtunities
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opportunities
 as much as others, it is hard to say that their
lives
 are meaningless and their jobs are demeaning depending on their obligations. In fact, all
lives
matters
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 and are sacred. In a nutshell, you may think that a meaningful
life
 is achievable only by advancing in a powerful position. In my opinion, a job isn’t the only thing that are labeling or defining our
life
’s meaning. There are
people
 who are happy and
blessful
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blissful
 with themselves without the
statusquo
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status quo
status-quo
.
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