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Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a short community. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #immigrants #culture #country #alternative #environment #community
Migrants
 moving
another
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 country to settle
their
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 by adopting the current
country
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culture
 and some
migrants
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want
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 to start their own
culture
is
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are
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 arguably noticeable. Will
this
 help to bring
a
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new prosperity or create problems when the residents
in
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 the current nation oppose them
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This
easy
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 will
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discuss
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discus
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discuss
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 the merits and demerits
about
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 the own
culture
 of
immigrants
 and
adapting
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adopting
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a
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new
culture
 using a pragmatic approach.
Firstly
, the important thing is that when society is democratic
then
 only the newcomers will have a chance to propose their own
culture
.
For example
, if you go to Western Countries like Europe, USA or Canada the locals will show interest in knowing about the new customs and they do adopt them if they are interested. In short, if the country follows democratic rule
then
 there is
possibility
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 for the
immigrants
 to introduce their own customs and values. Another crucial factor is that it is every individual’s interest in
adapting
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adopting
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a
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new
culture
 or not. If the nation is followed by a monarchy rule and the
migrants
 migrating to those nations should be adopting the new
culture
 for their livelihood.
For instance
,
migrants
 in Pakistan, Afghanistan and Iraq where they follow the monarchy rule, proposing a new
culture
 will create problems in their nations and
to
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immigrants
 as well.
Lastly
, in my opinion, it is every person’s own decision in following their own
culture
 or choosing a different one. The
immigrants
 should be respecting other
culture
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 values as they respect their own traditional values.
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