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In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people think that both
parents
 should
work
 and take care of the family.
This
 makes sense in some situations, but I think it's better for a family to divide up tasks. In most cultures, women did not have the freedom to
work
 until very recently. In the
last
 few decades, women have gained more rights in society, which has given them more
opportunity
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 to grow in their careers. Not only can women now
work
 and reach their full potential, but they
also
 have the chance to take on more responsibility. They can help their families with money and
also
 feel better about themselves. But the best way to take care of a child in a family is to have clear roles for everyone. If both
parents
work
, the kids won't get enough attention. Of course, rich families can hire a nanny to take care of the kids, but
this
 can't replace the love of one's real
parents
.
Also
, most families from the working class just have to
work
 harder at their jobs and at home.
This
 can make
parents
 very tired over time and make them feel helpless and overworked. It can even cause anxiety disorders and depression. In conclusion, if both
parents
work
, there wouldn’t be a healthy balance in a family; especially if the couple
have
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 small kids at home.
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