Some people are of the opinion that we must discontinue using fossil fuels and adopt renewable sources of energy. Yet others feel that renewable sources of energy are not as dependable as fossil fuels. Discuss both views.
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energy
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of natural resources such
as coal ,oil and etc. In this
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will explore both views.
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this
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the
great contribution and Correct article usage
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such
as cars ,planes ,or even factories , However
one big adverse of fossil fuel
is that it emmits
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which
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which
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the azon
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protects our planet's surface from gamma rays . On top of that gas or wood which is used in almost all machinerry
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fuel
is limited .Furthermore
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continuation
this
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may lead to irreparable consequences.
Renewable sources of Correct your spelling
materials
energy
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its
efficency
and quietness . There are many facilities are running on electricity , and yet Correct your spelling
efficiency
efficiently
amount
of these is increasing day by day .Electrical engines have come Add an article
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lives
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lifes
in cars ,fridges ,and other technologies .And Correct your spelling
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this
engine is not worse than one which runs on fossil fuel
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efficency
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efficiency
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, for example,
for example
electro cars are faster and quiet . However
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energy
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plants
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solar
sollar
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solar
ca
provide enough Correct your spelling
can
energy
for basic needs and they can easily provide the same energy
amount as the power plant or other fossil fuels .Besides
this
is danger free , it is not poluting
air ,or harming the Correct your spelling
polluting
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layer
as the fossil fuel
does. Benefits
are obvious .
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it was used for many decades ,it has Correct your spelling
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