There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..........., You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my
disappointing
about the service of your company, and Replace the word
disappointment
this
issue caused me Linking Words
have
s several Add the particle
to have
trobles
Correct your spelling
troubles
problem
.
Change to a plural noun
problems
Firstly
, I take Linking Words
bus
to my workplace every weekday and Add an article
a bus
the bus
this
is the Linking Words
directly
way for me to go to my office. Actually, I usually use your bus stop notification Replace the word
direct
apps
for checking the recently Use synonyms
time table
. Even thoughCorrect your spelling
timetable
,
the accuracy of the information from the Remove the comma
apply
apps
is probably on time, Use synonyms
but
it has more fault Correct word choice
apply
timer
since two weeks ago.
Fix the agreement mistake
timers
Secondly
, I Linking Words
have
got Unnecessary verb
apply
a wrong information
from the Remove the article
wrong information
a piece of wrong information
apps
Use synonyms
on
two weeks ago, and I completely Change preposition
apply
Correct your spelling
understand
unsderstand
that maybe have a mistake in Correct your spelling
understand
while
. Add an article
a while
However
, I have gotten the wrong Linking Words
arrived
time of the bus continuously Replace the word
arrival
after
the days.
I was frustrated and disappointed Change preposition
over
for
Change preposition
with
this
problem. I have tried to contact your customer service hotline. Unfortunately, your staff could not Linking Words
gave
me Change the verb form
give
a
answer that why the Change the article
an
apps
have Use synonyms
not
Correct your spelling
no
accuracy
. In Replace the word
accurate
additional
, I have Replace the word
addition
lated
to my workplaceCorrect your spelling
related
a
few Change preposition
for a
day
.
Change to a plural noun
days
Finally
, I suggest your IT support team Linking Words
to
check your Remove the particle
apply
apps
, if there might have some Use synonyms
buds
, and please check your system regularly to avoid the fault information.
I looking forward to hearing your Correct your spelling
bugs
reponse
for my opinionCorrect your spelling
response
,
and Remove the comma
apply
accurated
the problem.
Yours Faithfully,
Ms CheungCorrect your spelling
accurate
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.