There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..........., You should write at least 150 words.

#bus #service #reliability #area #two #weeks #manager #company #addresses

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my

disappointing

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about the service of your company, and

this

issue caused me

have

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to have

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s several

trobles

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troubles

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problem

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problems

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Firstly

, I take

bus

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a bus

the bus

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to my workplace every weekday and

this

is the

directly

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direct

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way for me to go to my office. Actually, I usually use your bus stop notification

apps

for checking the recently

time table

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timetable

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. Even though

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the accuracy of the information from the

apps

is probably on time,

but

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apply

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it has more fault

timer

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since two weeks ago.

Secondly

, I

have

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got

a wrong information

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wrong information

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from the

apps

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apply

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two weeks ago, and I completely

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understand

unsderstand

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understand

that maybe have a mistake in

while

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However

, I have gotten the wrong

arrived

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arrival

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time of the bus continuously

after

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over

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the days. I was frustrated and disappointed

for

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with

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this

problem. I have tried to contact your customer service hotline. Unfortunately, your staff could not

gave

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answer that why the

apps

have

not

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accuracy

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accurate

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. In

additional

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addition

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, I have

lated

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to my workplace

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for a

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few

day

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days

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Finally

, I suggest your IT support team

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check your

apps

, if there might have some

buds

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bugs

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, and please check your system regularly to avoid the fault information. I looking forward to hearing your

reponse

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response

for my opinion

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and

accurated

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accurate

the problem. Yours Faithfully, Ms Cheung

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
32Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

218 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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