Some people think that government spending on the restoration of old buildings in cities should be stopped. Instead they should spend the money for housing and road development. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, in

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modern era population has been increasing day by day.Public face numerous kinds of issues with their housing and transportation conjunction. I completely agree with

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phenomenon and discuss it in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, power

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funds

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their old buildings and restoration. It

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full for the public. Because in

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modern age they have a

lot

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food

source

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and new

building

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buildings

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. Visitors mostly like to visit modern apartment

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rather than the old living areas. They need more and more facilities.

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, each restoration and building has been time limit after some, period it needs some replacement it shows the basic problem.

such

as

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colour, lighting, and water leakage. Another example,

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survey conducted by BBC news channel which showed that the japan nation destroys old buildings because it's dangerous for local

people

.

Furthermore

, the government should spend money on roads and housing development. Because population are increasing.

People

face a lot of problems on road. Traffic is a common issue in every city. Authority should improve roads condition and traffic systems. As well as, most

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people

live

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in

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temporary address they need their own address government

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housing opportunity to

people

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, according to study housing problems and road conditions

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dramatically decrease individuals suffering from traffic issues in travelling time To conclude, the government should provide more funds for housing and road development rather than for old buildings and restoration