Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter in connection with
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serious problems
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that
taht
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I have faced since I moved to
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room
No.253.
To begin
with, I have a
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roommate
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roommate
who is a student of music and he needs to practice his musical instruments all day.
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, he often
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to
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music loudly deep in the night. His activities have negatively affected my concentration on my work.
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, a couple of days
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I had to take an important exam and I needed to have a bit
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to review my papers a day before the exam.
However
, my
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roommate
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roommate
started playing his violin without paying attention to my request. It resulted in a serious dispute between us so
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I decided to move out
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room
as soon as possible. I would like you to take my request into consideration and facilitate my
mouvement
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movement
to a more
cozy
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and quiet
room
where I will be able to lead my academic life without any
further
issues. I prefer not to share the
room
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anybody
anybod
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anyone
else. I hope you consider my request and reply back to my letter very soon. Yours faithfully, Amir Safa
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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