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It is believed that people are suffering from loads of health problems because of consuming too much fast food. Some people hold a thought that education should take responsibility for this phenomenon while others contradict with this opinion. Discuss both of them and give your own point of view

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Health
 is Wealth;
Health
 plays a vital
role
 in everybody's life. Some
communities
 believe that most
communities
 are suffering from
health
 problems due to the consumption of heavy fast
food
 and they say that it is the responsibility of the teaching system while some other
communities
 argue with
this
 matter. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both scenarios and
then
 I will give my opinion on
this
 matter with relevant examples. On the one side, Some
communities
 believe that
education
 plays a crucial
role
 in our day-to-day life. Many
people
 are consuming fast
food
 regularly which is leading to
health
 problems like obesity. The
Education
 system should take
care
 of their children regarding their
health
habits
 because most
people
 who are consuming fast
food
 are students. By giving awareness among
people
 about the consequences of consuming fast
food
then
 students will follow some healthy diets to be healthy.
For instance
, In School, teachers should give some lessons on healthy
food
habits
 and unhealthy
food
habits
then
 children will be aware of their
food
habits
 and follow a healthy diet. On the other side, Some
communities
 believe that it is not the responsibility of
education
 to take
care
 of
people
 who will eat fast
food
. Nowadays, from a child to an adult, everyone is eating fast
food
. Family members should take
care
 of their family those who eat fast because
people
 will get money from their family members only.
For instance
, A child, who is going to school will take money from his/her father or mother to eat outside so parents and family should take
care
 of their child from consuming fast
food
. To sum up, In my view
education
 and family both play a vital
role
 in
this
 matter. In the present day, most
people
 are suffering from obesity mainly due to the consumption of fast
food
. Self-responsibility
also
 plays a vital
role
 to take
care
 of their
health
.
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