Some people think that traditional games are better than modern games in helping children develop their abilities. To what extent do you agree?

Sports is an integral part of our life

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is no denying the fact that the phenomenon of playing sport is ubiquitous across the globe

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not only good for our physical health but

also

very beneficial for our mental health. A fair amount of people believe that traditional

games

are far more beneficial than modern

games

. Whether to agree or not it's a

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question . As far as I can see it's more justified to agree with the statement . In the upcoming ,paragraphs

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will not only shed light on both sides but

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elaborate on my point of view in the conclusion. If we have a deep look at the topic we can find numerous reasons why so many people believe that traditional

games

are better than modern

games

. The first and foremost reason behind

this

is traditional

games

like chess are a very good way to exercise our brains. It helps us to concentrate and

also

helps us to improve our independent thinking . Another striking benefit is

games

like cricket football , hide-and-seek , Tug of war plays a very important part

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our life . Playing outdoor

games

not only helps us to stay fit but

also

mentally fit

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Last

last

but not least , most of the traditional sports are played on a team . It helps the

children

to learn about communication, coordination, leadership , and calmness mostly it helps

children

to socialize . On the paradoxical side , some people believe modern

games

are good for

children

's mental development .it is quite true at some point.

firstly

, it helps

children

to get with the new technology .

Children

figure out how to play the game on their own which helps them to become independent . ,

Also

children

can compete with players around the globe to improve their communication

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there are more cons than

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regarding

this

issue .. first and foremost modern game like

videos game

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makes

children

unsocialized .

children

nowadays are more likely to spend their whole day in front of the computer screen which is very bad for their eyes . Another striking demerit is nowadays

children

hardly go outside to pay or do exercise which can cause serious diseases in future like obesity, low eyesight , back pain , hard to

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on work and many more. In conclusion , as far as I can see it is more justified to agree with the assertion that traditional

games

are better than modern

games

in the case of

children

's development . Traditional

games

help us in so many ways like to stay fit , be more productive , more energetic , help us to concentrate , and make us capable

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to the human race