A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighborhood. In your letter: - Recommend that your friend not go ahead with the purchase - Give the reasons behind your decision to leave - Suggest possible alternative areas that you know

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Dear Ravi, I am writing

this

letter with regret to inform you about my

move as I decided to leave

this

area despite the close proximity to my office.

Hence

, I would recommend you not buy and move to

this

location as we may be terrified of some unwanted things. As you heard, there are numerous crime situations evolving at a breathtaking pace daily which cannot be incalculable on 10th street, where you decided to move.

In addition

, local government bodies decided to stop all transport services right after 7pm daily to stop these crimes.

Therefore

it is absolutely not possible in your case as you will be back home at 9PM from the workplace. Having said that, please think twice before moving to

this

location.

However

, we have some new locations on the west side which are close to your children's school facilities. If not, on the other side, we have a few new apartments in the middle of the town and I guess

this

location is

also

a good one if we ingone the skyrocketing rents and other utilities charges. I look forward to seeing you in a good community and I wish you all the best in your house search. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Sat Sep 03 2022

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