increasing number of people are choosing cosmetic surgeries. Why do people have operations to change the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? (Health)

Being perfect has become a trend in the 21st century .

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are obsessed with beautiful bodies and clear skin . With the rapid growth of , the technology world has come a long way . Cosmetic

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become very easy to operate nowadays because of the technology . it's quite common to see a fair amount of

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have

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surgeries

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to get their dream face feature.

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is quite a controversial topic across the globe . Whether to agree or not it's a tough-provoking question. As far as I can see it's more justified to say that it has negative development in human society . In the upcoming ,paragraphs

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elaborate on my point of view . If we have a deep look at the issue we will find numerous reasons why

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go through

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surgeries

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and foremost reason behind

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easily gets influenced by others' life .

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choose to look like their idols who seems perfect to them . That's why

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often get

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surgery

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to more look like their role models. Another striking reason is

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feel insecure about themselves . In today's world beauty standards are very high . perfect body shape and fair skin are more important than inner beauty .

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often get bullied or discriminated against because of their looks that's why

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like to get

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surgery

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nowadays.

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but not least, in the past cosmetic

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were very expensive but now it becomes very cheap and available for everyone .

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, in Korea beauty standard is very high . Cosmetic

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is very common in Korea . 6 out of 10

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in South Korea do nose jobs to look pretty they even do double eyelid

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. On the paradoxical side, there are numerous side effects of cosmetic

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, as

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surgery

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becomes affordable and available everywhere

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go through many

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without consultation with a doctor . As a

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they face several health problems .

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, throughout the years , big lips become very trendy . So many

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got liposuction without any thought about how it would look .

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that looked horrible . To make it up they do more cosmetic

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until they look like

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dolls.

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, the famous Michael Jackson was one of the victims of cosmetic

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. He suffered a lot after going through multiple nose

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. In conclusion , cosmetic

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become very popular no doubt. it is quite beneficial for some

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who feel insecure about themselves . It gives them the confidence to face the world .but in my opinion , it is better to get cosmetic

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as less as possible because it can cause us several health issues .