Your friend recently moved to the same town you live in. Please write a letter to invite your friend to go to the gym together. In your letter describe • Why do you go to this gym? • Say what part of this gym you recommend. • Explain why you think it is suitable for your friend.

Dear Krishna, I hope

this

letter finds you in the pink of health. I am penning down

this

letter to make you aware of the most popular gymnasium in our locality. I am going to canvass about the gym and elucidate copious motives in the forthcoming paragraphs.

Firstly

, I know you are a fitness freak guy. I heard that you have moved to 6th avenue street, the green park road, Berlin. These days I am regularly going to the fitness centre as per doctor instructions because of my health conditions. As I

also

stay in the same area, I would like to recommend the Golden gym which is one of the best on our premises.

In addition

this

, there are special personal trainers at affordable prices on a monthly basis.

Furthermore

, it has top quality and sophisticated equipment arranged for every member associated with the gym.

Besides

, You enjoy a lot doing exercises and you maintain your body metabolism and fitness on daily basis. So, I suggest you join the forenamed proposition as it is a very nearby distance and has all sorts of materials which are required for your bodybuilding activities. Should you have any concerns or

further

clarifications, please do not hesitate to call on my mobile. looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Shankar.

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