Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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As you see the intensity
color
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of
willingness
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to eat
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an insect
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insect
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, Mexico holds the largest amount of
willingness
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with 71% and the number
familar
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familiar
on Peru and Thailand with the
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percent
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58 and 56 . Japan tent to avoid
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eating
getting
eatting
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eating
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insect
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insects
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as can see from the
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percent
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of
willingness
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that
hold
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the smallest amount which is 21%. the
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percent
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per cent
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willingness
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on
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USA
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is not so
difference
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from Australia with 35
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percent
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and 34
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percent
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as
follow
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to the price of
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insect
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insects
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in
USA
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the USA
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is
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being
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so expensive. As looking in the
grapth
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graph
,
alomost
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almost
wild insects are
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high
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hight
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high
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prices in
USA
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for
instant
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, The Weaver Ant has the price 10.65 USD per kilograms.
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Even though
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Eventhought
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farmed
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insect-like
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insect
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insects
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like cricket the price
still
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is still
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almost higher than
others
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other
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prodects
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products
projects
such
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as buffalo and pork.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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