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In certain countries, the number of people who use bicycles as the main means of transport is reducing even though it is beneficial both physically and environmentally. What can be the reasons for this change in preference? How can people be encouraged to use bicycles? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Earlier, many
communities
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 used
bicycles
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 as their main source of transportation but nowadays,
people
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 changed their transportation
vehicles
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 to other
vehicles
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 like bikes, cars, etc. Cycling is
one
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 of the good sports to keep
people
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 healthier. By using
bicycles
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 as their
transport
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people
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 will keep their bodies healthy and
also
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 protect the environment from pollution.
However
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, they are not using
bicycles
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 as their
transport
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 and there is a rapid decrease in their usage. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss the reasons for these changes and
then
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 will see some solutions to encourage
people
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 to use
bicycles
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.
Firstly
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, In
this
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 modern and developed era,
communities
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 are not using
bicycles
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 as their source of
transport
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.
One
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 reason is, that
communities
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 are having hectic work schedules so they don't want to waste their
time
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 on transportation. There is a huge advancement in technology, so there are various
vehicles
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 to
transport
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 from
one
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place
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 to another
place
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 by saving
time
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. So, due to lack of
time
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,
communities
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 changed their
transport
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 to advanced
vehicles
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 like cars, bikes, etc.
For instance
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, A software employee, who is travelling from home to the office will use the bike to reach his/her office within their office timings.
Secondly
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, There are various benefits to using cycles as their source of
transport
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. By bringing awareness among the
communities
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 about the benefits of cycling
then
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 we can encourage
people
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 to use
bicycles
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 as their
transport
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vehicles
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. By cycling every day,
people
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 will be fit physically and healthy.
Bicycles
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 do not require fuels to travel from
one
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place
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 to another
place
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 like advanced
vehicles
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, in
this
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 way, pollution will be reduced and
communities
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 can protect their environment.
For instance
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, My father uses a bicycle as his
transport
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 when he wants to travel to nearby places by 1 to 2 km. In
this
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 way, he will control his blood pressure and be healthy and
also
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 protect our environment. To sum up, In my view, Most
communities
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 are not using
bicycles
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 due to lack of
time
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 but by bringing awareness among them
then
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 they will start using
bicycles
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 as their
transport
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 at least to travel to nearby places.
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