In some countries, boys and girls are educated in different school rather than in the same school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
There is no iota of doubt about the fact that education plays an important role in our
life
. In some regions of the world Fix the agreement mistake
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student
of the opposite gender Fix the agreement mistake
students
not
study together. In Change the verb form
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this
essay, I will outline what I consider to be the potential advantages of a non-coed education system
, that I feel are likely to occur, as well as
some of the negative outcomes.
First and foremost, the main advantage of the non-coed schooling system
is that students are more focused in this
environment. obviously, if boys and girls are not studying together they are not going to distract
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be distracted
while
studying. for instance
, one of my friends completed his study till 12th class in boys school, he was very focused and he got marks in every class 98 per cent whereas
after 12th he got admission in coed college his score was drastically decreased. Moreover
, science topics like production or some medical topic
can be discussed more properly in a non-coed education Fix the agreement mistake
topics
system
rather than in the coed system
.
On the other hand
, the pupil who studied not with the opposite gender has socially
interaction issues. because they have less interaction with the opposing sex, they hesitate to talk to each other. Change the word
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As a result
, they face
a lack of self-esteem and communication problems. In fact, a report from the London institute
published that students who study in the non-coed Capitalize word
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face
a lack of confidence. Furthermore
, non-coeducational background learners face
a hard time friends
with each other.
In conclusion, even though I feel the coed learning Add a missing verb
being friends
system
is much more focused and motivated, non-coed face
low self-esteem. Students should face
both experiences.Submitted by support on
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