Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packing of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that
manufacturers
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and supermarkets should reduce the amount of packaging of
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. In opposite, others argue that customers have to avoid buying
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with a lot of packaging. And I am
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of all, exactly the
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are responsible for creating
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packaging. It is their direct responsibility:
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the "healthy" packaging process. They should think not only about how to protect the
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but
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about how to protect
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nature. I think that
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must have
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rules
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packaging on their plants.
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, I guess it would be great to have some official governmental rules that will restrict the
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of
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of not !- nesseccery -! packaging.
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, there should be high fees for
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organizations which will not follow that rules. That will help us to avoid
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cheating. And for me, it seems to be a good step in creating of !-
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, to argue the
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statement I need to point out the fact, that customers cannot evaluate the packaging before they receive their
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. It is only up to the sender. One thing that
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can do is to leave a comment to the sender with a ! - favour -! to reduce the amount of packaging. To sum up, I
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important nowadays. Because we have a lot of problems with our nature pollution. All
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, have to think about the materials they use for packaging. All materials need to be as organic and natural as possible. And for sure all of them should be well-recycled.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Eco-friendly
  • Carbon footprint
  • Excessive packaging
  • Biodegradable materials
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Consumer advocacy
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Waste reduction
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Green practices
  • Minimalist lifestyle
  • Resource conservation
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Packaging alternatives
  • Regulatory measures
  • Ethical choices
  • Environmental impact assessment
  • Renewable resources
  • Compostable packaging
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