Nowadays, more and more children play computer games. Why do you think this is the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

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In recent years technology has increased rapidly. Now youngsters are more diverted to playing

computer

games

rather than playing outdoor

games

. in

this

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I will discuss why

children

are attracted to

such

kinds of

games

and

also

will debate their positive and negative side effects.In my ,opinion it has more cons than pros. Nowadays, mostly both parents are working so they want their child to be at home and safe in their absence. so they tend to buy

computer

games

so that

children

will be at home and

this

will give them peace of mind. Another reason could be people are living in small houses

children

don't have much space to play physical

games

computer

games

help them to keep them busy.

Additionally

, nowadays

children

live in nuclear families or being a single

child

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they are more attracted to

computer

games

. Some parents

also

allow their

children

to play some educational

games

for example

"Raz Kids" for mathematics or "ABCA" for reading .

However

computer

games

have some positive ratio but it has

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negative impact on youngsters , as they not doing any physical activities , they are just sitting on the chair and playing which could

led

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to severe health issues

for example

obesity , red eyes and mental stress. On the other ,hand some online

computer

games

are using bulger languages which are impacting their cultural values.

Moreover

, as

children

stick to their

games

they are less involved in family matters even do not interact with their parents.as it is clearly seen that

computer

games

have certainly bad impact on child's physical , moral and mental health. To sum up,

Although

computer

games

are interesting and educative it has serious negative impacts which can distract

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generation and could create major health issues.

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