Your friend has written to you asking for your advice on his/her parents who will be visiting your area. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: Suggest the places they can visit Recommend a place where they can stay Offer to do something with them.

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Dear Ravi, I am glad to know about your parent's upcoming trip to my place and I would suggest visiting the best places around Vancouver city including the spectacular waterfalls, mesmerizing theme parks and breathtaking sceneries throughout the province. As you know, we have skyrocketing rents here which cost you an eye and a leg,

hence

, I strongly recommended to stay at outside of the city.

In addition

, we have shared accommodation along with well kitchen items which are going to charge weekly basis and I am sure that

this

will save some additional expenses too. Having said that, I can offer a ride to visit some of the places nearby Vancouver city.

Furthermore

, I can extend my support to look after your's father medication as he needs to consult the doctor frequently. Please do not hesitate to ask me for any other favour if they need anything during their trip and I feel always happy to help them at my place. I am excited and look forward to seeing them at the airport and I wish them a very happy and safe journey to Canada. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

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