Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could computers be considered a hindrance? What is your opinion?

Two points of view on computers’ impact on people’s lives are easily understandable. On the one side, due to technology, there have been enormous advances in communications and many other fields of human achievements. Computers help us make routine operations more accessible and quicker, help to save our time, providing an opportunity to make operations or work distantly.
Conversely
, without understanding how to deal with new instruments, there is a high probability of getting problems
instead
of advantages. Computers have significantly changed how most people in the developed world live. Questions of security, critical approach to recognising accurate and fake information, studying, safely finding professional and personal contacts, and others demand users constantly improve their skills. Incredibly important to keep technology and life balance pattern. It is widely used in most countries now. Be responsible not only for themselves but
also
for children and our parents in
this
context. We must ensure every generation has access to both nowadays opportunities and responsibilities.
However
, asserting that the responsible and wise approach is a disadvantage would be incorrect. It gives each person the additional fields to improve themself, to expand the horizons of one’s possibilities. By practising
this
approach, every person can feel more protected and confident, have more control over their life and at the same time use all the advantages of modern technologies in general and computers
in particular
. There are no instruments in the world which are good or bad. Human responsibility is the turning point of the result of interaction with any of them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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