Even though some people insist that
could be addicted to
, I agree that
are helpful for
to reduce their
because of the pressure of academic performance, because
can
be useful for their academic accomplishment.
On the one hand, some people argue that
are more likely to be absorbed in
. Since most
are made to attract young
, they can lose their self-control ability because they are too young to handle themselves compared to adults.
, when
play
, they can’t realize how much time has passed because they fall deeply into the
.
,
leads young kids to severe addiction in some cases.
, according to an experiment done by Oxford University in 2018, after observing both adults and
who had played
for a year, they found that 70% of
were addicted to the
, and the percentage of
who were addicted to the
was 40% higher than the percentage for adults.
, I don’t agree with
idea because if parents can manage their kids not to spend a lot of time playing
, there is less possibility for young kids to be addicted to the
.
, playing
is a useful activity for reducing
’ academic
. Nowadays, there is so much burden on
because of their academic performance, which leads them to get stressed significantly.
to high pressure on
, they have fewer opportunities to relieve their
because of their busy schedules for a variety of lessons and studies. To cope with the problem, playing
is a good way to address their
. While playing
, they can move forward, by breaking the stages in the game, which makes them feel a sense of achievement. Eventually,
leads
to reduce their
, which is from academic performance.
, in 2021, one research team interviewed high school
in Seoul and asked them how they dealt with their
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the only way to reduce their
. In my opinion, I agree with
idea because playing
will not only reduce
but
be beneficial for
to increase their concentration on studies.
, playing
will be helpful for
to achieve academic success.
In conclusion, even though
can get addition to
, I agree that the advantages of
outweigh the disadvantages because
can relieve their
while playing
and they can
be useful for
to achieve academic accomplishment.