Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

There is a social phenomenon that some
children
are doted by their
parents
. In my opinion, it is an incorrect method to cultivate
children
, which may cause a series of negative long-term influences
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the growth of
children
. There are several reasons why I strongly believe that doting
children
is
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way to educate
children
.
Firstly
, it does not help
children
develop a correct sense of right or wrong
,
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because they do
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things
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of
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the consequences.
In addition
, they
don’t
know if they can do it because of
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parenting style.
Secondly
, it is more likely to let
children
develop some bad
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, which even lead to
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crime.
For example
, once their
parents
don’t
agree with their demands, they might do something crazy, like losing their temper, running away from home, and even killing their
parents
.
On the other hand
,
children
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indulgent environment are more likely to develop a
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personality in the future. because they
don’t
have the ability of self-control as well as a clear limit of whether what they can do.
Also
, they make a decision only in terms of their mind rather than
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reality.
For example
, after they enter the workforce, if they
don’t
achieve their work goals ,they tend to lose their temper
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other people or pass the buck, because they rarely look to themselves for reasons, so they may be ostracized by other colleagues. In conclusion,
parents
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correct way to lead
children
,
this
method can not only help
children
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,but
also
help them fit into society in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • indulgent
  • entitlement
  • discipline
  • responsibility
  • nurturing
  • self-reliance
  • adversity
  • autonomy
  • validation
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