You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • Say what the participant liked about the hotel. • Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. • Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future.
Dear Sir
I am Tahsin Adam, I reserved your restaurant for a lunch meeting yesterday.
First
of all, I would like to thank you for your hospitality and facilities, and I appreciate the good services offered by your staff. But Linking Words
on the other hand
, I would like to draw your attention to some comments on the food served.
Particularly, the meats were so salty and oily, and vegetables were cooked unfreshly, Linking Words
thus
all members participating were upset and they started complaining. Linking Words
Consequently
, my director manager and I felt so embarrassed due that no one finished their meal.
The company I work for arranges regular meetings with our clients and agents every month, for that reason, I will give you some advances about food quality for Linking Words
next
time. Linking Words
Firstly
, you should pay attention that meats cooked with less salt and avoid excessive oil and vegetables cooked freshly. Linking Words
In addition
, I would like to suggest that you add some pasta to Linking Words
main
course and host ice cream pre-lunch.Correct article usage
the main
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,