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The below shows the structure of solar panels and its use.

#structure #panels
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us
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the structure of a simple solar panel.
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, they show two main ways of working
of
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 that systems.
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Fist
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 of all, a common solar panel consists of transparent glass on the top of the body.
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Next
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 important thing is the
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presence
 of input and output holes for the fuel. The major function of glass is
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transportation
transpiration
transparation
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the transparation
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 of the sun rays. Which in order will be used to hit the fuel.
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 point is that there are 2 different types of fuel for
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pannels
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panels
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: air and water.
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, for both the
sun
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 rays are the source of energy. Their main function is
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receiving
receiveing
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receiving
 and accumulating
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solar energy. And after the process of
hiting
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hitting
heating
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 air or water will be able
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do
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to
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 deliver the energy to the output.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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