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Many people think that group or team activities can be more useful for life than those activities which are done alone.

#people #group #team #activities #life
Many
people
 think that group or
team
 activities can be more useful for life than those activities which are done alone. It seems that
argues
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 under that statement will never end. But I totally agree with that!
First
 of all, human is a collective
animals
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. There are a huge amount of !-examples -!. The main thing of all of them is that
people
 can not leave without society. And if
people
 have a lack of communication with others it can cause !- psychological -
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 issues. And to be able to leave
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 and !-
healty
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healthy
 -! life you should know how to act in society.
Moreover
, nowadays, many
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educational systems are established on group
activitiesactivities
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activities activities
. And
this
 is additional proof that humans are able to do their best only with a
team
. If that statement is not true, why do so smart and high-educated teachers support it?
Lastlast
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Last last
, but not least is that
team
 membership develops many of our useful skills.
For example
, leadership, personal communication,
teamworking
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. All of them are important to us just to have a good job and social status. And can you imagine someone who is able to develop their leadership skills without other
people
? It is simply impossible. To sum up, I should say, that indeed there are some activities that require doing them alone. But what are the most popular sports in the world? Right-
teamteam
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team team
 sports,
such
 as football (№1) and ice hockey (№2). It is always more enjoyable to follow how the whole
team
 works
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 than to follow one person.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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