Mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops or on public transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Even though mobile
phones
are indispensable equipment in modern life, there are some debates about the negative sides. It is believed that these devices should be prohibited in public spots. From my point of view, I only partly agree because
although
public society will enhance due to the
ban
on mobile
phones
, there are some necessities they bring to us. On the one hand, there are many reasons to
ban
mobile
phones
in public areas.
To begin
with, on account of curiosity, a number of urban children spend the most time on
phones
such
as playing games, surfing Facebook and watching TikTok videos,
instead
of being involved in outdoor activities and interacting with friends, resulting in inactivity.
In addition
, many adolescents use mobile
phones
for their own benefit
such
as to attract people by taking many selfie photos or films in dangerous spots despite warming and posting on social media.
This
leaves consequences that many people imitate the videos and put themself in danger.
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that mobile
phones
bring many benefits to humans.
Phones
are devices providing information in every aspect of life, especially for those overseas, conveniently searching data about places by using mobile
phones
so
phones
can improve the standard of life.
Furthermore
, they are used for communicating with others
although
from any distance. To be specific, when someone is injured in an accident, people around will call an ambulance to take them to the hospital to save them
in
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time. To summarize, while there are many social benefits due to the
ban
on mobile
phones
, the need for them is that they must be handy at all times. As I said, I partly agree with
this
policy. I think the government should choose
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