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3 different spreads is presented in the line graph.
Additionally
, the timescales of the survey are provided as well (from 1981 to 2007).
First
of all, as it can be seen from the chart, data regarding ‘Low fat & reduced spreads’ have been gathered since 1996, meanwhile ‘Margarine’ and ‘Butter’ were initial in the list. To go into great detail, ‘Butter’ had a slight increase from a little more than 140
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of it plummeted afterwards until 1996, when
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On the other hand
, ‘Margarine’ was fluctuating between 80 and 100
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before 2001, and
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soared until 2001, when each of the goods bore a negative trend. All in all, consumption of the spreads declined considerably, except
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fat & reduced spreads’ which had a negligible fall after a significant upward trend.
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