Your friend has asked you to help him/her to find a music teacher for his/her child. Write a letter to your friend that you have found a suitable teacher. In your letter, you should tell: what experience the teacher has why you think he/she is suitable how to get in touch with the teacher.

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Dear Sneha, It's great to hear that you are enrolling your child
to
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music
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class. I am writing
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as per request, I found a very talented and hard-working
teacher
Ms Hema. Ms . Hema is a renowned classical
teacher
at the Drona music academy. She has 15 years of total experience in classical music and
also
she is a certified dancer.She Can teach dance as well to your offspring ,
for example
, Kathak or Kuchipudi . I feel she will be the most suitable
teacher
because of her experience for sure , but
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in primary school so she is well aware of how to teach beginners and small kids.
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, she lives near to your house which will help you to drop off and pick up your kid before and after classes. Now , if you want to connect with her , you can contact her directly as I referred you and
also
you can mail her and discuss fees and timing. Hope it helps and do let me know if you need any other help. Warm Regards Pooja
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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