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Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is an undeniable fact that social
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social
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 is important to our
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. I partly agree with both ideas for the following reasons. Social has advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand,
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social
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 has changed our
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 very differently since
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. If you have to see or write a letter to your friend before, now you just use social to do that. The social
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 is very handy if you're a good user. When you’re a good user, you can make benefit and improve your
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 from social.
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, when some people were overuse social and spent most of their time on
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, they were lost their relationships.
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 has had a negative effect on their social lives. That can make their
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 worse if they don’t change their social lives. In short, it's logical to accept the negative and the positive of
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. Another factor of greater importance is that we should take everything into account before deciding.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • modern forms of communication
  • email
  • messaging
  • reduce
  • amount of time
  • see friends
  • social lives
  • technology
  • communication
  • faster
  • convenient
  • stay in touch
  • connect
  • online
  • social media platforms
  • meet new people
  • face-to-face interactions
  • maintain relationships
  • excessive reliance
  • social isolation
  • digital communication
  • emotional depth
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