Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. Others, however, believe that people should be free to choose sports. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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are considered to be dangerous

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their violence

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violence

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nature and high chances of injuries.

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some argue that hazardous

sports

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must be banned, I am in

favor

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of those who believe in the freedom of choice between

sports

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. Some

sports

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involve

violence

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and

athletes

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get hurt.

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has led some to bring up the idea of

illegalization

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the illegalization

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of

such

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sports

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. They assert that if

such

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sport

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games are not to be banned, not only vice

behavior

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would be encouraged in society, but

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competitors are likely to get hurt.

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can be significantly true about some

sports

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that are based on physical assaults

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as boxing, wrestling, MMA, and so on. Audiences of these

type

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types

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of

sports

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, especially young ones, are more likely to commit violent acts because of the influence of

brutality

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the brutality

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of

sport

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fights on them.

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,

athletes

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could get serious injuries during

such

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sports

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. The culprit is rather clear since opponents of these

type

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types

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of

sports

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are going to be hit by their rivals.

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, these types of dangerous

sports

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should be banned in order to prevent the promotion of

violence

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among individuals and health problems

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athletes

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.

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, forbidding people from watching and doing some

sports

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, could be considered

as

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violation of human rights. Since

athletes

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know what they are getting into, and

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the watching-crowd

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watching-crowd

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watching crowd

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know

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what they are about to see, banning these

sports

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could violate peoples' freedom of choice.

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, individuals must be able to choose what

sports

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they want to do or watch.

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,

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could not be employed for teenagers,

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their lack of sufficient awareness about the dark sides of dangerous

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that could cause serious

damages

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to their health.

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, some boxers have died during their match which for sure is not appropriate for adolescents to witness

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and can have

negative

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impact on their mental health.

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,

although

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watching and doing dangerous

sports

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could cause

violence

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promotion and serious

damages

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, respectively, in my opinion, people should be free to choose to do so or not.

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, I

also

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believe that children must be banned from choosing

such

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sports

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.