some people think that hosting an international sporting event is beneficial for a country while others disagree. Do the advantages of hosting major sporting events outweigh the disadvantages?
Being the host of a worldwide sporting
event
is good for a country
since it will give many advantages to the country
's income and its people
's livelihood. Many people
from all over the world will visit the country
where the event
is held resulting in an increase in travel demands, such
as flights, hotels, and other accommodations. Sometimes, foreign and domestic athletes will not only visit the town where the event
occurred, but also
other towns that might be famous because of the scenery, culture, or cuisine. Those activities will automatically increase the local people
's income. On the other side, the local government usually will build the proper facilities and infrastructures in order to make sure they meet international standards. This
also
gives quite a benefit for local people
for future development. The only disadvantages that might be endured by the country
are the budget for creating the required standard facilities and the safety guarantee for the foreigners during their visits. In conclusion, hosting an international sporting event
will give more benefits than losses to the country
and people
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite