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Write a letter to apply for position of dealing with clients in English-speaking countries

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Dear Sir or Madam, I saw your
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 posted on Linkedin,
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 1/1/2034. After I read the conditions required for the occupation, I find myself qualified to work with you.
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, I am writing
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 letter to express my keen interest in
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 requirement due to my varied horizons. Let me elaborate on my
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 position.
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, I graduated in computer science from Anna university, I
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speak
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 English fluently and have previously worked with English companies.
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, I hold English language certifications, and I passed the IELTS exam with a score of 8.5.
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, Let me draw your attention that I have around +10 years of work experience and work across multiple countries.
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, I have the ability to read and write emails
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 foreign languages, and during my university
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 I worked as a tour guide, particularly for tourists from Europe and Canada. In conclusion, I found
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 job more suitable for me considering my past position, and please feel free to contact me if you want more details and queries. I anticipate your response for
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 procedure. Yours faithfully. Tahsin Adam.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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