Write a letter to a cinema manager you have previously been to regarding a problem you had. In your letter mention - Which the movie was and when you saw it - What the problem was - What the manager should do to rectify the problem

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you about a

movie

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that I saw recently. I have seen

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movie

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almost one month ago. the

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's name was Avatar. I was watching

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film

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with my friends. There was a problem for us, unfortunately, we could not hear the

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sound very clearly. we were really passionate about

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movie

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. if we want to explain our situation we do not understand any things about

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and the environment of the

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was really noisy.

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, we usually used to watch films in calm in the past and

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environment and

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happen will annoy us. I have some suggestions for your

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, according to the old technology that exists in your

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, I think so you should upgrade some devices related to your

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as a speaker for hearing the

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sound in the form of clearly.

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will cause people to want to see movies with high-quality sound. I am looking forward to hearing about your

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changes. Yours faithfully. Sajjad.

Submitted by mail.100jad on Wed Sep 07 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

175 words

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Write a letter to a cinema manager you have previously been to regarding a problem you had. In your letter mention - Which the movie was and when you saw it - What the problem was - What the manager should do to rectify the problem

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