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People believe that not all school children have the natural ability to learn a new language. This means is not right to force all school children to study a foreign language. Do you agree or disagree ?

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 modern era, some
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 believe that pupils should have a natural
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 to learn new things like a foreign
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 and should not force everyone on learning it. I honestly disagree with
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 with, thanks to new methods in the education field, the process of learning has become much easier than past.
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 that, nowadays we are living in a world where communication with other cultures and nationalities is so essential.
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, it is so important that the young generation especially the pupils learn new languages.
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, learning foreign languages is difficult for most
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 but it is not due to the fact that they do not have the
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 to learn. Mostly, it is related to the education system in most countries.
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, in Iran, the importance of learning a new
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 is not clear and obvious to most schools.
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, it is completely up to the students to try and learn it while it is really hard for some of them.
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, it is true to say some skills are required to have the
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 or the talent but it is not the same for a new
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.
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, America's Got Talent Tv show is a programme for talented folks and they do extraordinary things that normal
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 cannot do it. So it is totally related to the natural
ability
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 that some
people
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 have but learning a foreign
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 for students is just like a lesson and we have never said a person ,
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, cannot learn history or math. He may have some weaknesses in that lesson but it does not mean a lack of
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. In a nutshell, I believe that all the students and
people
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 have enough
ability
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 for doing things, but it is the weaknesses and strengths of the folks that distinguish them from each other.
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