The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate
road
access to a city
hospital in 2007 and in 2010. It is apparent that the layout of the city
hospital had experienced some changes.
In the past, the hospital was encircled by Ring Road
and Hospital Road
led to the entrance of Ring Road
.There was another road
named City
Road
parallel Ring
Change preposition
to Ring
Road
. All of the roads remained in 2010. The major change was that two roundabouts were built up on two ends of Hospital Road
linking Ring Road
and City
Road
.
There are other changes taking place. On the east side of Hospital Road
, there was a car park
both for staff and the public in 2007. After modifications, this
car park
was changed into a staff
Change the verb form
staffed
park
in 2010. And a car park
which was exclusive to the public could be approached in the east of City
Hospital, situated along the side of Ring Road
. Besides
, a new bus station located in the southwest of the hospital replaced the small bus stops alongside Hospital Road
.
In general, road
access to the hospital was altered and extended, and some public facilities were established between 2007 and 2010.Submitted by guanyushi9593 on
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