The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate
road
access to a Use synonyms
city
hospital in 2007 and in 2010. It is apparent that the layout of the Use synonyms
city
hospital had experienced some changes.
In the past, the hospital was encircled by Ring Use synonyms
Road
and Hospital Use synonyms
Road
led to the entrance of Ring Use synonyms
Road
.There was another Use synonyms
road
named Use synonyms
City
Use synonyms
Road
parallel Use synonyms
Ring
Change preposition
to Ring
Road
. All of the roads remained in 2010. The major change was that two roundabouts were built up on two ends of Hospital Use synonyms
Road
linking Ring Use synonyms
Road
and Use synonyms
City
Use synonyms
Road
.
There are other changes taking place. On the east side of Hospital Use synonyms
Road
, there was a car Use synonyms
park
both for staff and the public in 2007. After modifications, Use synonyms
this
car Linking Words
park
was changed into a Use synonyms
staff
Change the verb form
staffed
park
in 2010. And a car Use synonyms
park
which was exclusive to the public could be approached in the east of Use synonyms
City
Hospital, situated along the side of Ring Use synonyms
Road
. Use synonyms
Besides
, a new bus station located in the southwest of the hospital replaced the small bus stops alongside Hospital Linking Words
Road
.
In general, Use synonyms
road
access to the hospital was altered and extended, and some public facilities were established between 2007 and 2010.Use synonyms
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