Some people are of the opinion that being highly qualified is the only way to ensure a well-paying job. While others believe that having work experience is the best way to get a well-paying job. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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highly qualified

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only they are getting good salaries but some others say the experienced people give preference for high pay off. In

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essay, will discuss both sides of

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and my opinion in the following paragraphs.

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with, education plays an important role in the life of

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. The college and universities

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a curriculum which helps to understand the particular concept related to their field.

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laboratory facilities, the students are getting practical knowledge together with the academic theories.

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can give them an idea about the competition in the market.

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in surgical to become

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in their subjects.

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job interviews and the opportunity of getting a well-paid job, which is the

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step into

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career, can be acquired through institutional studies.

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, many multinational companies prefer to hire a person with good background and offered them

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high wages.

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, firms think that they can get good revenue with highly

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staff.

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, Facebook and Twitter always give preference to candidates who have experience.

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, certain jobs require practice more than theoretical intelligence. To conclude,

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of hard work, dedication

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the job, sincerity and determination

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humankind valuable.

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, education is vital to achieve a degree and

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start a career while with experience numbers of opportunities are higher. In my opinion, work experience along with analytical skills derived from qualified education can ensure a well-paid profession.