Technology has enabled the mass production of goods with the use of machines. Discuss the merits and demerits of mechanized production.

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Nowadays, technology is getting vast day by day. In every field,
machines
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are used for manufacturing and transferring
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material from one place to another.
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,
this
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essay will explain the benefits of having the tool doing all the
work
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, and
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, it will describe the downsides of
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advanced world.
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with, the use of machinery assists
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production of various products. With the rapid increase of population and increasing demand for household items all over the world, the set-ups made it easy to
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requirement
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on
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basis.
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, Hershey’s has a production of milk products produces dairy products
such
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as shakes and drinks, using advanced
machines
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,
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and supplies
it
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to all of the stores.
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, automation
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made
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human life easy.
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, robotics taking over the physical
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required, that was previously done by humans, and now they only need human supervision.
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increase of dependency on
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, there is a threat of lesser
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for humans. In many large
organizations
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almost all the
work
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is being done by programmed
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, which is giving rise to unemployment.
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, recently a multi-billion dollar company Amazon has adopted
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handling for all its items, which will indeed affect the employees doing the same jobs.
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, organizations will have to bear the huge maintenance cost for keeping the
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running properly, and will need to invest heavily in upgrading their
machines
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according to the needs. In conclusion,
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are faster as compared to humankind.
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, being totally dependent on these engineering marvels will cause humanity to lose their jobs, and high companies will have to face high maintenance costs.
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