The tables below gives information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

The tables below gives information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
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The two tables provide data about turnover from
Fairtrade -labelled
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coffee
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and
bananas
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in five European nations in 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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,
while
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the
revenue
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of
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coffee
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increased in all five countries,
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bananas
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just witnessed a rise in
sales
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of
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three nations namely,
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UK
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the UK
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, Switzerland and Denmark.
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, the
UK
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had the highest surge in the figure for both products in 1999 and 2004. In the
Coffee
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table data, the
UK
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experienced a dramatic soar in
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revenue
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in 2004 13 times higher than in 1999, which is the country with the most amount of
coffee
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consumed. Switzerland was ranked second with
sales
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of 3
million
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euros
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in 1999 and 6
million
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euros
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in 2004, followed by Denmark with 1,8
million
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euros
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in 1999 and 2
million
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euros
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in 2004.
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, in Belgium and Sweden, the
revenue
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of
coffee
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in 1999 and 2004 was less than 2
million
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euros
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with 1
million
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euros
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and 1.7
million
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euros
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, 0.8
million
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euros
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and 1
million
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euros
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, turn on. The
revenue
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of
Bananas
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in the
UK
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was highest with 15
million
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euros
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in 1999 and 47
million
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euros
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in 2000.
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in 1999 the
sales
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of
bananas
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in Sweden had ranked second with 2
million
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euros
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, in 2004 that position was ceded to Switzerland with 5.5
million
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euros
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.
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Denmark witnessed a sharp increase in the turnover from
bananas
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with 0.6
million
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euro
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in 1999 and 4
million
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euros
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in 2004, in Belgium, the
sales
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of
bananas
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declined from 1.8
million
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euros
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to 1
million
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euros
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in 1999 and 2004, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "besides, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas, revenue, sales, uk, million, euros with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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