Write about the following topic: It is believed that there is a negative impact of tourism on tourist spots which is majorly due to the behaviour of people who visit there. Why do you think that people behave badly when they visit some places? What measures can be taken to resolve this issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Tourism
plays a vital role in
this
modern and developed nation. Some
communities
believe that there is a negative impact on
tourism
due to the
behaviour
of tourists. Nowadays,
communities
are not behaving in an admirable way when they visit
tourist
spots. By giving awareness about the importance of
tourist
spots we can resolve
this
issue. In
this
essay, I will discuss
this
matter with some relevant examples.
To begin
with,
Tourist
spots are attractions around the world.
Moreover
, a nation's economy depends on its
tourist
places
. But, nowadays,
communities
are spoiling the environment of
tourist
places
due to their bad
behaviour
.
For instance
, In India, Hyderabad is one of the most popular
places
to visit. My friends and I went to Ananthagiri hills for trekking but that area is full of plastic bottles and plastic covers were thrown by visitors. In
this
way, many
tourist
places
are not protected by tourists due to their bad
behaviour
.
This
behaviour
also
affects living beings in
tourist
places
.
For instance
, People who visit wild areas throw their plastic wastes in forests where these plastics will be consumed by animals in forests which affects their health and may
also
lead to their death.
Secondly
, there is one solution to recover
tourist
places
and protect them which is bringing awareness among the
communities
. In schools, workforces, etc people should follow some rules to keep their surroundings clean in a similar way they should follow some rules to keep the environment safe and protect the
tourist
's
places
.
For instance
, During my school days, our school teachers told me the importance of
tourism
and how it plays a major role in the growth of the country's economy. To sum up, the Major problem due to the
behaviour
of tourists in
tourist
places
is plastics which are leading to pollution and the only solution to
this
problem is to bring awareness among the people about
tourism
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural insensitivity
  • Environmental degradation
  • Ecological sensitivity
  • Anonymity
  • Accountability
  • Responsible tourism
  • Sustainable tourism
  • Conservation
  • Over-crowding
  • Community-based tourism
  • Educational campaigns
  • Strict enforcement
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