There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, humans are more outrageous than compared
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olden
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days
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some disadvantages to
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society. In
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I am going to explain
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with reasons.
To begin
with, due to technological advances, news all over
world
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can easily reach every individual.
Furthermore
, due to the influence of movies and other
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programmes
programs
programms
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which show that people should react in more furious ways to any type of devastating
situations
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. To illustrate, the movies which are based on history, the director becomes more creative
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a situation of war or other
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situation into an outrageous one. Due to
this
, the audience
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influenced
from
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and try to solve any
such
news in
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fuming way.
However
,
this
trend has some negative effects on
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society. If any inter-continental conflict circumstances arise and the people deal
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with
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more
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anxious manner
then
,
the
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world peace is destroyed.
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in turn leads to disharmony,
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among the human race.
In addition
, the children will learn
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thing from the elder generation due to which the future generation becomes more outrageous at all the circumstances of life.
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of
this
being irritated in the workplace can cause loss.
For example
, if the employer is arrogant to his employees,
then
many of the will quit the job To conclude, for the
well being
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of every individual on the planet Earth, peace among the people is very important.
This
can be achieved if we handle any situation in
calm
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and cool way.
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  • Outrage culture
  • Amplification
  • Economic hardship
  • Sensationalist
  • Polarization
  • Constructive outcomes
  • Social frustration
  • Divisiveness
  • Societal norms
  • Historical context
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