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Everybody should be allowed admission to university programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

It is believed that
universities
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 should admit
everyone
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 interested, no matter how well they do in
educational
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the educational
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 system. I completely disapprove of
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 statement as not only it would be a waste of time for some, but
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 it would lead to some very serious consequences connected to
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the process
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 of enrollment.
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, not
everyone
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 is gifted or hard-working enough (or both) to keep up in more challenging
universities
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. No academic requirements for
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top notch
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 uni’s would encourage many different people to “try their luck”. I know for a fact, that some of these persons would be extremely delusional,
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dropouts
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 rate would
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skyrocket
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sky rocket
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.
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, statistics in countries where it is tougher to get into a brilliant university
shows
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 that many more students actually finish studying
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 of changing school or quitting for good.
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,
universities
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 would get much more attention and many more people would try to join them, resulting in overloading those places with more students than they would be capable of having. —40minut— Results of that would be tragic as professors would not have time for
everyone
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 so schedules would be impossible to make. In conclusion, accepting
everyone
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 into uni’s would bring many ravages
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time
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 of unaware people and bringing chaos to
universities
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 themselves.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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